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Super Mario Bros Online: A Novelization

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« on: May 17, 2010, 10:50:58 pm »

I don't know if this counts as advetising or not, but I'm making a story on fanfiction.net about the game.

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5976198/1/Super_Mario_Bros_Online_A_Novelization

As you can tell, I'm a terrible writer. If you feel that this stinks, why don't you help me by sending me documents of a chapter? I really need help writing this, since I'm not used to writing outside if script format. If anyone wants to give me chapters to continue the story, I'll give you credit for the chapter once I post it. You can also give me ideas for future chapters as well.

Well, is the story ok?
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« Reply #1 on: May 17, 2010, 11:34:35 pm »

I like that you're doing this! Your writing seems fine to me, and the story seems fine. I don't know if we can consider it advertising because we can't tell how many people joined SMBO because of it. Good luck with it!
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« Reply #2 on: May 27, 2010, 08:48:20 pm »

Posted a new chapter. The "blur" is probably obvious.
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« Reply #3 on: May 27, 2010, 09:45:36 pm »

There are only 2 people the blur im thinking about, either me or hydra lol
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« Reply #4 on: June 10, 2010, 06:32:49 pm »

Very good Shroomerson! Also, you could put me inside. XD
Your writting isn't that bad seriously.
My writting is ok, but better on portuguese Tongue
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« Reply #5 on: June 15, 2010, 01:24:39 am »

It's good, probably better than me, at least. Lol.

I'm guessing the blur is Hydra...

Something i want to point out, though - now, there's way more Yoshis than Luigis, or it's just me. Amanda, UberYoshi, me, XXVI (some might have seen him as Kekkaishi, FullMetal, Ferret, or Alchemist.), YoshiKing, BlazeingYoshi... the list goes on.
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« Reply #6 on: June 17, 2010, 11:24:11 pm »

Hope the new chapter I posted makes up for me being busy.

Plus, a special cameo appearance!
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« Reply #7 on: June 18, 2010, 11:46:12 am »

Thanks, lol. I enjoyed that chapter!
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« Reply #8 on: June 19, 2010, 04:44:40 pm »

I was in a good mood today, so I made a new chapter. Another cameo appearence, plus a battle scene!
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« Reply #9 on: June 19, 2010, 04:52:12 pm »

I like reading your story. Keep it up!
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« Reply #10 on: June 19, 2010, 07:43:51 pm »

I enjoy this, Keep up the good work, YAY a cameo of me probobly, and only amanda has ever beaten me,I give you the permission to use me in the story, i dont mind
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« Reply #11 on: June 20, 2010, 07:22:02 am »

hey do you know how can get my SMBO avatar as my picture for my account on this? Huh?
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« Reply #12 on: June 20, 2010, 11:08:50 am »

You'll need to take an in-game screenshot with either F11 or F12 and separate your character from the rest of the picture using an image editing program such as Paint. Then, at the top of the forums, click on PROFILE > Forum Profile Information and click "I will upload my own picture:." All you have to do after that is browse for where you saved your picture.

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This is a great story! Keep it up!

EDIT: I'd also just like to point out something: hydra actually has a rainbow colored vest as well. You may not have noticed this because he often wears equipment.
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« Reply #13 on: June 20, 2010, 06:24:01 pm »

I couldn't hold this in any longer. I want to tell you about the next chapter!

1. Another fight scene is in this chapter, and why is that Lakitu summoning lightning?
2. This chapter will tie in with another Mario game. What's this "Tico" I keep hearing about?
3. Another person will appear in this chapter. It's a really popular person.

Next chapter will come soon, maybe tomorrow even! Wink
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« Reply #14 on: June 21, 2010, 11:25:00 am »

New chapter added. I couldn't fit in the fight scene with the Lightning Lakitu, so he'll appear next chapter.

In case you didn't get the hints:

2: "Tico" is Japanese for Luma, meaning the chapter will tie in with Galaxy 1 and 2
3. The popular person was Chaox. He appears in this chapter.

Enjoy!
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