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I don't know if this counts as advetising or not, but I'm making a story on fanfiction.net about the game.

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5976198/1/Super_Mario_Bros_Online_A_Novelization (http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5976198/1/Super_Mario_Bros_Online_A_Novelization)

As you can tell, I'm a terrible writer. If you feel that this stinks, why don't you help me by sending me documents of a chapter? I really need help writing this, since I'm not used to writing outside if script format. If anyone wants to give me chapters to continue the story, I'll give you credit for the chapter once I post it. You can also give me ideas for future chapters as well.

Well, is the story ok?

I like that you're doing this! Your writing seems fine to me, and the story seems fine. I don't know if we can consider it advertising because we can't tell how many people joined SMBO because of it. Good luck with it!

Posted a new chapter. The "blur" is probably obvious.

There are only 2 people the blur im thinking about, either me or hydra lol

Very good Shroomerson! Also, you could put me inside. XD
Your writting isn't that bad seriously.
My writting is ok, but better on portuguese :P

It's good, probably better than me, at least. Lol.

I'm guessing the blur is Hydra...

Something i want to point out, though - now, there's way more Yoshis than Luigis, or it's just me. Amanda, UberYoshi, me, XXVI (some might have seen him as Kekkaishi, FullMetal, Ferret, or Alchemist.), YoshiKing, BlazeingYoshi... the list goes on.

Hope the new chapter I posted makes up for me being busy.

Plus, a special cameo appearance!

Thanks, lol. I enjoyed that chapter!

I was in a good mood today, so I made a new chapter. Another cameo appearence, plus a battle scene!

I like reading your story. Keep it up!

I enjoy this, Keep up the good work, YAY a cameo of me probobly, and only amanda has ever beaten me,I give you the permission to use me in the story, i dont mind

hey do you know how can get my SMBO avatar as my picture for my account on this? ???

You'll need to take an in-game screenshot with either F11 or F12 and separate your character from the rest of the picture using an image editing program such as Paint. Then, at the top of the forums, click on PROFILE > Forum Profile Information and click "I will upload my own picture:." All you have to do after that is browse for where you saved your picture.

Back on topic:
This is a great story! Keep it up!

EDIT: I'd also just like to point out something: hydra actually has a rainbow colored vest as well. You may not have noticed this because he often wears equipment.

I couldn't hold this in any longer. I want to tell you about the next chapter!

1. Another fight scene is in this chapter, and why is that Lakitu summoning lightning?
2. This chapter will tie in with another Mario game. What's this "Tico" I keep hearing about?
3. Another person will appear in this chapter. It's a really popular person.

Next chapter will come soon, maybe tomorrow even! ;)

New chapter added. I couldn't fit in the fight scene with the Lightning Lakitu, so he'll appear next chapter.

In case you didn't get the hints:

2: "Tico" is Japanese for Luma, meaning the chapter will tie in with Galaxy 1 and 2
3. The popular person was Chaox. He appears in this chapter.

Enjoy!

Lol, the shadow throwing the dark energy balls reminds me of Ganondorf. This 'master' wouldn't be the Gerudo tyrant himself, would it? Unlikely, since it's a SMBO story, and Bowser's the villain, apparently...

No, it's not Ganondorf, it's someone else. I don't want to spoil it though!

Alright, it's fine.

Just a few questions:

-Has this 'master' been in any official Mario game?
-Is it a player?
-Is it something other than the above two?

-Yes
-No
-You'll know him VERY well.

Bowser? *shot*

No other Mario villain has been more used, besides, say, a Goomba. xD

And then there's Wart and Tatanga, who barely anyone knows except for people who played the reaaallllyyyy old Mario games...

Yay! I'm in!!!  :D

The master is nonetheless Waddle Dee because his Glare can kill Godzilla, He walks and Chuck Norris Trembles in Fear, Weegee Had a Seizure at his Merciless Power

*facepalm*.

On second thought, by any chance could it be Fawful?

Nope.

On second thought, I made a mistake. It's a completely new enemy, although you might recognize the shadow....

Sorry I haven't updated yet, been busy playing some video games. The chapter is about halfway done, and I'll get to it when I have a chance.

Is the shadow Count Bleck by any chance? He just came up in my mind...

I say its shadow mario :P

I would very much like to see this be revived! if somebody wants to take the project on their owns hands go for it! it was an interesting concept